INST 154
Apollo at 50
Fall 2019
E5: Term Paper
The goal of your term paper will be to apply what you have leaned in
about what made Apollo successful to begin to think about how other
"big things" were accomplished, or might in the future be
accomplished. You will select some other audacious goal that either
was, was not, or has yet to be achieved. Then over the course of the
semester, you should try to draw parallels between your chosen goal
and the Apollo Program.
There are many types of goals that you might consider, including:
- Social challenges, such as:
- Achieving one of the United Nations sustainable development goals
- Winning Richard Nixon's "war on drugs"
- Providing universal health care in the United States
- Ending legal discrimination on the basis of race
- Winning President Johnson's "war on poverty"
- Ending the gender pay gap
- Eliminating racial disparities in income and wealth
- Preventing mass shootings in the United States
- Ending the Great Depression
- Resolving world hunger
- Reducing the effect of COVID-19 on the global economy
- Achieving universal suffrage in the United States
- Eliminating homelessness in the United States
- Technology development, such as:
- Developing and widely applying a vaccine for COVID-19
- Combating the global AIDS crisis
- Mitigating global warming
- Developing nuclear weapons and their delivery systems
- Making commercial air travel safe
- Preparing the world's hospitals to mitigate the effects of a global pandemic
- Preventing or curing Alzheimer's disease
- Ending U.S. reliance on foreign oil
- Developing the modern Internet
- Eradicating smallpox on a global scale
- Establishing a permanent human colony on Mars
- Creation of national-scale rail system
- Adoption of the printing press and development of the publishing industry
- Armed conflict, such as:
- Defeating of Nazi Germany in World War II
- Achieving the North Vietnamese victory in the Vietnam War
- Fighting The global war on terrorism
- Achieving American independence from the British
- The southward and westward expansion of non-native settlements during the Indian Wars
- Eliminating nuclear weapons
- The liberation of Haiti from France
- The defeat of Napoleon
- Spanish conquest of the New World
- The victory of the North in the US Civil War
- The end of the Roman Empire
- Resolving the Israeli-Palestinian conflict
- The establishment of the first Communist state in Russia
Note that you might disagree with the way I have grouped these. For
example, the AIDS crisis was as much a social challenge as it was a
challenge for medical "technology," some technologies are used in
armed conflict (e.g., nuclear weapons, but also the Internet), and
armed conflict sometimes arises from social challenges. And you might
easily think of other categories (e.g., the economic rise of China
doesn't fit neatly into any of these categories). The key is to have
some way of thinking about what kind of challenge you want to study,
and having a list of categories with a few examples may be useful as a
starting point. Note also that not all of my examples were completely
successful (Nixon's war on drugs, for example), but we can learn as
much from failure as from success. So don't hesitate to choose a
(partial) failure if the goal was important and ambitions.
At the end of the semester, you will then write a 4-6 page
(single-spaced, standard margins, 12-point font, not counting
references) term paper in which you draw on what you have learned in
this class to focus on the factors that did, didn’t, will or won’t
make it possible to achieve your chosen goal. There are many aspects
of the Apollo program that you might consider for comparison and
contrast with your chosen goal, including, for example:
- Politics. Apollo was made possible by political consensus, both at the time it started and as it evolved.
- Urgency. Apollo had to happen quickly if it was to serve its purpose, and that sense of urgency helped to maintain the political consensus.
- Economy. Apollo was costly, but the economy of the nation was sufficiently large at the time to bear that cost.
- Organization. Apollo was largely a bureaucracy, but there were also elements of a market (in the contracting) and cooperation (both between agencies of the US government and between different governments).
- Technology. Apollo relied principally on applying and extending kinds of technologies that were already known.
- Infrastructure. Many of the more mundane things Apollo relied on (printing, telephones, airlines, cities, highways, railroads, cars, manufacturing facilities, a legal system, ...) already existed.
Surely you can add to that list.
Part 1: Select a Goal
First select a goal and write a half page about it. We want to know
what your goal is (in not much more detail than listed above in the
examples), why you selected it (i.e., what about it do you find
interesting as a basis for comparison with Apollo), when did or will
it happen, and what you already know about it (i.e., will this all be
new to you, or is it something you have already studied?). Feel free
to select any of the examples used above, or any other similarly
ambitious goal (please don't select something of much smaller scale,
such as inventing Facebook or earning a Ph.D.). It would be best if
your goal were situated after the widespread introduction of printing
(about 1450), and if it is a future goal if it were in the twenty-first
century -- there is little to be gained by entering the realm of
further back history (where fewer sources may be available) or science
fiction (where it might be hard to ground your claims
adequately). This assignment is graded as part of your final term
paper grade, and we will offer feedback on your proposal. You must
work individually on your term paper, even if one or more other
students in the class select a related focus.
Part 2: Do your research
As the semester proceeds, you should take notes about aspects of the
Apollo program that you can compare and contrast with the goal you
have selected. You should strive to have a new insight on this every
week or two, and to write down your thoughts at the time. Then when
you finish your team experience you will already have notes assembled
that will give you a structure for thinking about how to tackle big
challenges.
The next thing to do is to see how others have already thought about
your problem. Internet sources can be useful as ways of getting
started, but for real depth you will eventually want to find a few
good books on the topic. You don't need to read the the whole book in
each case -- and indeed you won't have time to -- but you will benefit
enormously from reading parts of them. Internet sources are often
designed to advocate a position rather than to provide a detailed
analysis of an issue, and you really do need access to detailed
analysis to shape your thinking. Both the University libraries and
the public libraries have many (but not nearly all) of their books
available online, so finding the books you need may well be possible
even wen physical libraries are shut down.
Part 3: Create an Outline
A good strategy when writing a paper on a complex topic is to outline
your paper. For this paper, your outline should contain at least
- An introduction that clearly states the goal;
- A background section that describes the context in which your
goal was, was not, or may yet be achieved;
- a section analyzing the factors that made or may make your goal
achievable (or unachievable!);
- the story of how your goal did work out or speculation on how
it may work out; and
- a conclusion in which you draw out some important points that
can be learned from your analysis about how big things get done,
illuminating both commonalities with and differences from Apollo.
As the grading rubric below indicates, the most important part of this
is part 3, the "analysis of factors." You'll want to identify 5-10
factors (fewer if you want to analyze each in depth; more if you want
to cover a broader range of factors) and then do a fairly detailed
analysis of each factor. Good factors are those that are common to
many audacious efforts. For example, if your goal was to win the
American Civil War, the size of your economy would be a good factor to
choose, but which General was in charge at a specific battle would not
be (because you don't want factors that apply only to one thing). As
a starting point for identifying broadly applicable factors I have
created a list of factors that
we have touched on in one way or another during this semester that
applied to Apollo, wording each in a way that I expect would be
generally applicable to many efforts to do "big things."
Upload your outline to ELMS by the date shown it the syllabus. Your
outline will be graded as a part of your term paper grade. Don't miss
this step -- the single things most strongly correlated with getting
a good grade on the paper is submitting a well thought out outline on
which we can give you comments!
Part 4: Draft your Paper
Once you are ready to write the paper, you can simply pick any part of
the outline and start writing. It is usually best to start in the
middle -- the introduction and the conclusion are easier to write
after the rest of the paper is there. Don't try to make your first
draft perfect -- write quickly, leave yourself notes on things that you
need to go back and fix, and then at the end you'll be able to go back
and get those details fleshed out. Try to write the whole paper in a
few days -- it is often easier to make progress when you get on a roll
and the ideas start flowing. Note that the goal here is not to get to
a perfect paper but to one that can be improved -- you can't improve
your paper until it exists, so the sooner it exists, the better it
will be in the end.
Then you spend few days working through the paper and improving it,
and doing some focused research to fill in gaps in your knowledge.
Your goal should be to get to a fairly smooth paper -- that must be
complete but that does not yet need to be perfect. Before class on
the date indicated in the schedule, upload a complete draft of your
term paper to ELMS. This is not the final version -- we will assign
two of your discussion table partners to read it, and you will read
two of theirs. Then at our next class session you'll have a chance to
discuss you paper and their paper with them. Your TA will also give
you comments.
Part 5: Polish your Paper and Submit It
At this point you will have seen two other papers, and gotten comments
from at least two people on your paper, and you will have been
thinking about it for several weeks. So you should be ready to take a
pass with fresh eyes and further improve it. Once you do, you would
be wise to send it to a friend for a final read and comments before
you turn it in. As with all of your writing, you must cite your
sources, use quotation marks where you quote from a source, and
scrupulously avoid plagiarism. Your final paper must be uploaded to
ELMS by the date and time indicated in the schedule, which is during
the final exam period.
Example
An example of a good term paper from a
prior semester is available. Note, however, that the length
requirements in that semester were different. Note also that this is
just one example of a good term paper -- there are many other factors
that could have been included in the analysis, and there are several
other ways of organizing that analysis. Finally, note that this paper
addresses a goal that was remarkably similar to Apollo (in the sense
that both goals essentially called for technical accomplishments) and
that if you are working on a goal ore focused on human behavior than
on technology that you will likely find many more differences from
Apollo (as the readings class session 26 can help to illustrate).
Grading Rubric
The following rubric will be used to grade your assignment:
- 2 points: Proper length
- 3 points: Good, clear writing and proper grammar
- 2 points: Proper citations
- 2 points: Introduction
- 2 points: Background
- 8 points: Analysis
- 2 points: Story
- 4 points: Conclusion, including comparison to Apollo
Doug
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